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Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) LoveLiesBroken 2011-11-01
o.o
awkward silence
Are you....serious?! Did you plan this out from the beginning?! This changes...
EVERYTHING.
o.o
Please update soon. I don't know...
I can't even...
Dear Lord.
Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) japulapu 2011-11-02
I want to know as well. Did you plan for this to happen from the beginning? I never work out things like that....Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) bringmetolife 2011-11-02
First of all, I really enjoy reading this story and I think you are a good writer.
However, I don't want to be like the bad guy here, but this chapter doesn't seem like your A-game at all. In chapter 72 it seemed all dramatic and you ended in a big cliffhanger and I couldn't wait to see how it turns out... And then in this chapter, it's just not good. All that suspense kind of broke down and I'm left here like 'wtf'. It wasn't believable, honestly. And it's such a cliche as well. If I were you, I'd rewrite this chapter and change the whole mom being alive to something else more unexpected. Like maybe Gia is adopted? Maybe she is really, biologically Mikey's kid? Who knows, but you could've made it more unexpected. I would've been a lot more surprised.Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) kirrahdiviney 2011-11-02
oh my god?! she's alive!? let gia meet her oh my god.
this. changes. everything.
you HAVE to update soon!
- kirrah xx
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