Mikey needs his big brother and guardian to listen. Gerard needs his baby brother and charge to tell him what's wrong. Short, extremely angsty one-shot. Strong language.
(#) tortillachip 2011-11-12 12:17:34 PMWhy are you so good to me? Do you think I could borrow some of your great writing skills? Anyway, this is really good. I like how Mikey says "But still, it feels good to have my brother back instead of some stranger trying to be my father." Gerard, can't you see that Mikey just wants to go back to the way you were before. He wants to be you're brother again. I bet I've probably annoyed you with my comments, and sorry if i do, but you just write extremely well. I know my comments sound the same. Something along the lines of "I like this, I like that, you write very well, blah blah" but I mean everything I say when I read your stories. There's such a different vibe, I guess, about your writing than I've seen from any other author. Sorry for being all annoying and stuff whenever I comment.
Author's responseYou're commets are, in no way shape or form, annoying! Half the stuff that I put up here I wouldn't have bothered to put up unless someone had told me that they like what I write (if that males sense), and your reviews never fail to motivate me to write! Thank you sooooo much for reading and reviewing! :)