Frank comes home to an unpleasant surprise.
I feel so sorry for Gerard and as the story goes on, I like Jamia less and less. It's weird, but even though they have very small parts in the story, I really like Cherry and Lily. They seem...inteligent. If that makes any sense. Maybe observent is a better word. Anyways, I love this story, I think it's my favorite you've written.
This is really good, and even know it's fiction - I do feel sorry for Gerard. There is only one thing I don't like, you said in you A/N 'so the ending doesn’t feel weird' -- please don't tell me this is going to end anytime soon! I love it!
i LOVE this. especially Cherry and Lily, they're so cute >.< update soon?
- kirrah xx
(#) MCR_love 2011-11-03 08:56:20 PM
I really like this fic.
It's written very well that some parts of it made me want to cry.
Keep up the good work. :)