"I’d pushed my broken-winged angel over the edge."
(#) tortillachip 2011-11-04 12:45:12 PMYou amaze me. I don't even know what to say to this. Well I do, but I don't know if I can because you left me speechless. I can type though, which is a good thing. So now I'll start. I think one of the best lines in a fanfiction story I've ever read was right here in this story. " I'd pushed my broken-winged angel over the edge." This was so cleverly written because you could've just said "I'm the reason my love tried to kill himself." But you thought of this and I'm glad because that's just a beautiful line and I wish I could've thought of it. Another thing is when Gerard's all angry at Frank, but he wouldn't have had to run after Mikey if Gerard hadn't said what he said. So they both messed up, and Gerard shouldn't get angry because he was the one that caused Mikey to run away in the first place. One more thing is when Frank's all like "He may be an angel, but he's my angel and Heaven can't have him!" I just liked that part because it shows how much Frank really loves him. I interpreted that line to mean that dead people who haven't done bad things go to Heaven and Mikey is good and he is the person Frank loves, so how can he die? But it can also mean that angels live in Heaven. Well, I can't wrote everything that I loved about this because I'd have to go line by line from the first one to the last and I'll just go on and on about how lovely and beautiful and sad and well written it is and my review would be longer than the actual chapter, so I'm just gonna end this now.
Author's responseOh. My. God. Thank you sooooo much for this review and for taking the time to say what exactly you like about it! Thank you for reviewing pretty much every chapter so far - it really motivates me to write more. I'm extremely happy that you liked it. Thanks again. :D
(#) tortillachip 2011-11-04 12:53:50 PMOh yeah. I forgot to add that I liked the Heaven line because it shows how people in love think. They just think that nothing can happen to the person you love because love is greater than whatever they're going through. If air isn't enough to live, than love is and nothing can stop you from loving. Not even death, so death can go back to wherever it came from and leave them alone because they're in love and love is stronger than everything else. That's the logic of a person in love.
Not that I'd know, I've never been in real actual love, but I've read enough fanfiction to get an idea.
(#) X-ToxicRainbow-X 2011-11-04 04:05:09 PMOh my gosh. Im Speechless This Is So Wonderfully Written. I Havent Seen Stories Like This In A Long Time. PLease Update Soon. :)
Author's responseThank you very much - I'm very please that you liked it! I'll try to update at some point over the weekend. Thanks again :)
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-11-04 05:51:21 PMThis is really amazing. You are seriously a great writer. There is so much in this one chapter that means so much and you write it really well! Keep on writing !!!
Author's responseThank you sooo much, it's very sweet of you to say that! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing! :)