by Poppana
3 Reviews
Category: My Chemical Romance -
Rating: G - Genres: - Characters: -
Published: 2011/11/04 - Updated: 2011/11/04 - 2353 words - Complete
Reviews
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tis store seem to be dragin to much, lyk it is soooo loooong nd notin rly hapen. if i was u, i wud ad sumtin dranatic u no? nd yea tere is dat ting wit da mum but lyk som1 sad in da reviws for chp 73, its not verry originel u no?
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(#) japulapu 2011-11-05 09:15:55 AM
I know right! I mean, meeting you allegedly dead mother with her family is sooooo boring! And taking up drinking is so old! And having your stepmother deliver her baby is nothing. It's totally normal having all these things happening at once!I liked this chapter. I liked Lindsey very much too. I was listening to Jetset Life while reading the end and I thought it suits this chapter well. This story did slow down for a while but I think it's back in action. It might be slightly cliched but the way you write it makes all the difference.
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great work! can't wait for the next chapter :3
- kirrah xx
p.s. i cannot believe the illiterate person's still here.