The boys go out drinking. What happens when they return? Edited. I wasn't to happy with this chapter so I re wrote some of it.
- I like the story line, but it feels like this chapter went a bit too fast. It felt like you wrote it in a couple of minutes. Please, don't get me wrong, I absolutely love your writing, but that just how I feel.
Author's responseI did rush it a bit because I hadn't updated. But I am also struggling to write at the moment. I can't get any inspiration :/
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