"I have to make it up to him or else this screaming guilt will deafen me." FRIKEY one-shot. Read, review, rate and feel my love :P
(#) tortillachip 2011-11-13 01:07:33 PMI'm feeling a bit weird now. Earlier I was like " I'd really like to read some highschool Frikey where Frank's popular and Mikey isn't." This delivers like nothing else. I always like when people write about how they used to be friends, but I think yours is better than most or all because you show how it truly affected Mikey. And Frank didn't even beat Mikey up, but it affected him enough that he would try to kill himself. I really like how Mikey's outburst is really truthful. He's all like," you really wanna know? Well I hate you!" That whole part is just amazing. I imagine that it really ate at Frank that Mikey would say that Frank was worse than those kids who hated him in elementary school. Those kids weren't traitors. And what Mikey said about wishing he never met Frank, I could really see how much it meant that Frank wasn't there for him anymore. And though Mikey hates what Frank turned into, his love is stronger than that and he can't help but hope that Frank goes back to being who he was before. They used to have it so good, why did you ruin it Frank??This is, without a doubt, my favorite highschool Frikey. Well done, and I just love the lat line and the ending over all.
Author's responseThank you very much! I love reading/writing high school frikey and I am glad that you enjoyed reading this (ridiculously long) one-shot as much as I enjoyed writing it! Thank you sooooo much for reading and reviewing - it means a lot to know that someone likes the crap I come up with! :)
(#) LePanicFan 2011-11-14 08:26:44 AMThis is so brilliant, I really can't even begin to describe it. At first it was all fun, then it got deeper and I was actually crying when Gerard called, because I could tell what was going to happen. And now I'm happy again, because they're together and it's all beautiful, but I'm still crying! It kinda hit a nerve, because something similar to this happened in my life and I realise now that tihng WILL get better, so thank you so much for that.
I just love it so much, and normally I'd tell one-shotters that it would be cool with another chapter but this is so perfect it needs nothing else :)
You're definatly going on my favorites :D
- Betsy xx
Author's responseThank you sooo much for reviewing, but please don't cry! I'm extremely glad that this helped you out; things always get better even when it seems that things are about as bad as they can get, never lose hope because everything heals in time. I guess that that was kinda the point of the one-shot. Thank you very much for leaving such a lovely review, I'm glad that you liked it! :)