My first One-shot,sad. "Gee..." Mikey choked out. "Frank's gone remember? He's been for about a week now..." Slightly edited!
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2011-11-14 09:41:20 PMOk, this actually made me cry. It was really well done, but just.... Really sad.
Author's responseThank you! This was actually me aim, to make people cry. Not trying to be mean, but this is supposed to be a sad story, so yea. Thanks for reviewing!
(#) TheLittleSinner 2011-11-14 10:26:15 PM:O this was beautiful. I have to admit, I was crying a bit too. Okay, so Uh... Not just a "bit".... I loved this. And I look forward to reading more from you!
Author's responseThank You! Hopefully I'l cook up more one shots, my mind works in weird ways xD.
P.S. : You're the first person ever to call my work 'beautiful'. Thank you so much for that.
- Awwww, I was crying at the end! If only this wasnt a one-shot...... oMG i realized Mikey said he was coming over in the mornig! What will he think if he found Gerard dead? oMG O_O I'm rambling..... Anyway, long story shory, this was awesome ans I loved it
Author's responseAww... it's okay, I love rambling. And thanks, your the third person to say you cried! Sounds mean, but that was my aim. Well I guess it's not mean, since it was supposed to be a sad one shot. Heh, and I wondered that too.
0_o I just realized I rambled xD
(#) SyraStrange 2011-11-17 09:22:28 PMShit... Suicides, they just make me feel so pissed. That feeling like you coulda done something to stop It, you know... Just... Uhhggg... Beautifully written. It was really good.
Author's responseI know right? Suicide is a weird thing to me..... like it's not right, but not wrong. Ummm... I don't know, I should stop with that. And thanks, good reviews always make me smile!
(#) ILoveHobos 2011-12-31 02:01:24 AMThis was really well done :)
It was sad
But it was happy
Gee made the right decision
Which was good
But poor Mikey.
Mikey was gonna find him like that.
Great one shot dude, great one shot.
Author's responseThanks a ton! And im glad you think that, and the funny thing is that I kinda forgot about Mikey....just create your own ending for that haha