"He is blatantly in need of my help, even if he’s too helpless to realise it just yet." Read, review, rate and feel my love :P
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-11-22 04:35:36 PMThe smile your stories put on my face are amazing. I love it. I really don't know what to say. It seems like I'm always telling you the story is excellent and they are but I can never really explain how much I love this story. You must put so much time into this. It's just...ugh I can't explain :( I hope your arm is feeling better and thank you very much for posting it do soon with one hand!!
Author's responseThank you very much! I'm pleased that my writing you smile! Thanks for reviewing; I always love reading your reviews! It doesn't hurt as much as last night, but I'm going for an xray to see if anythings broken and if I need a cast :/
Thanks for reviewing! :)
(#) tortillachip 2011-11-22 04:42:20 PMThis is absolutely wonderful, and sorry to hear about your arm. I hope it gets better. Well, I think this is great. I really like the part where Frank curses when he's speaking to Mikey and how Frank imagines Mikey might feel because of it. Scared and creeped out and all the things that fall in-between the two. I like how caring Frank is and how he really believes that the world is just at it's lowest point because someone like Mikey has gotten hurt. I also really like the way you ended it. It kinda connects to that part about feeling like an overprotective mom. I can imagine Frank with his hand on his hip and the index finger of his other hand is pointing in a way that clearly says " you're going to be sorry." The ending also left you wondering what will happen next. I'm coming up with scenarios but they don't seem right, and I'm pretty sure they wouldn't happen in this story anyway because you're so unpredictable in your writing, another thing I like about the way you write. I also like how the chapter title connects with the story, but I also like the actual title. I can imagine Frank saying something like "While I desperately want to heal him, rid him of any pain that he may feel, I can't, but I can come pretty close." Or " You can't heal the hurt, but you can help them heal themselves." This last one seems kinda like a real life Frank Iero thing to say, and in the story those lines would be written better because I'm terrible at
writing. Anyway, this is very well written and I'm unsure as to why you think this isn't anything but fabulous. It provokes strong imagery and emotion and you get a real glimpse into a world that doesn't really exist. I can only ever say good things about your writing. Also, I know I said this already, but I hope your arm gets better. I haven't had an accident like that yet so I don't know how that feels, but I imagine it can't feel good.
Author's responseThank you very much! I like what you imagine Frank saying, I wish I'd thought of that! Judging by the standard of your reviews, I would say that you're a great writer! I always love reading your reviews, they're the best medicine; my arms feeling better already! I'm going for an xray this morning to find out if I need a cast and if anything is broken. Thank you soooo much for reviewing! :)
(#) SyraStrange 2011-11-26 03:50:33 AMIt nice to know there are people in this world that have ways to go. I mean seriously, you should go pretty far with writing like this... Please update...
Author's responseAww, thanks! I love writing and it's so uplifiting to know that people like the crap I come up with. I try to update daily and reviews always motivate me to write; especially when they're as lovely as yours! Thanks for reviewing! :)