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Tears of Red and Gold part 2

More of the same...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2011/11/25 - Updated: 2011/11/26 - 5658 words

Reviews

• Tears of Red and Gold

  (#) soul-of-the-phoenix 2011-11-26 07:34:19 AM

  I saw this "twist" coming a mile away. Also, while this is an interesting idea, there's too much summary and too little physical action. I suggest rewriting some of these scenes as flashbacks, put us in the story rather than reviewing it from afar.

• Tears of Red and Gold

  (#) Jden 2011-11-26 12:06:30 PM

  Despite nitpicking by others, concerning your style of writing, I found the story very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.

  Author's response

  You're very welcome. Thank you for taking the time to review.

• Tears of Red and Gold

  (#) paddyjungari 2012-07-16 05:21:16 AM

  Very good story while the twist was predictable the idea behind the story was very interesting and origonal

• Tears of Red and Gold

  (#) LabRat 2013-04-26 06:47:45 PM

  Hmm, I kind of figured that Harry was her missing husband. I'm guessing that Dumbledore made the wish for someone to defeat Voldemort, and Oor was the one who got shafted into being Harry, the sacrificial savior.

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