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Killing your master

by ImJustFine 2 Reviews

Lend me your teeth and I'll bite you.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst,Horror - Characters:  - Published: 2011/11/26 - Updated: 2011/11/26 - 104 words - Complete

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  • Killing your master

    (#) aweirdtree 2012-01-06 10:34:55 AM

    oh god... i just have to say that your poems are something very fucking extraordinary. thanks for this! i love it! am totally gonna add you to my favourites (:

    Author's response

    Oh my goodness. I'm fucking speechless. It's people like you who keeps the world afloat, people like you save lives. I can't thank you enough, just... If you were anywhere near me right now I would be fucking choking you with hugs, ok?
  • Killing your master

    (#) AdnarimSmada 2012-05-25 11:00:54 AM

    I like it. XD I am able to envision such tales because of your poetry. In this poem, I kind of see someone getting themselves out of an abusive relationship whether it be mentally or from an another actual living person. You're one of those poets who bring it all down to their final stanzas.

    It's hard for me to find poetry that I actually want to read man but your's would be some.

    -Adnarim Smada

    Author's response

    Thank you xD Another poem I wrote when I was thirteen :P This one is actually written around the time when a classmate of mine kept picking fights because she couldn't stand me. She's one of those witty girls who have a lot of foul words to pour, and she actually made me cry like a baby just by whispering mean words at my back in class, which is saying something...

    Oh my, thank you! That is really flattering :3

    -ImJustFine

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