He had taken something pure inside of her and broken it in to pieces.
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-12-03 03:15:18 AMIt was short but that was all it needed. This was perfect, the best chapter so far I think because it expressed everything perfectly. I forgive Frank now but I'm still pissed off with him!!
Author's responseAw, thank you! I'm really glad you think so. Yeah... I'm hoping that I can write his character well enough to express his complete sorrow towards what he's done while still expressing Hayley's feelings correctly.
I'll try to soon. (:
(#) Bad_Romance 2011-12-03 08:03:37 AMCompletely agree with the above review. It was so sad though cos all emotions were out there. And Hayley talking to frank was heartbreaking.
Really can't wait for the next part.
Author's responseThank you! (:
I'm gonna try to work on it a little tonight so hopefully I'll have it posted soon.
- this is really one of my fav fanfictions, so UBER THANK YOU :D
but i loved this chapter even though it was short, so i totally agree with the above reviews.
please update :D
Author's responseAw, really? Wow. Thank you so much! (:
I'll definitely try to soon!
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2012-02-08 07:52:28 AMIt's funny, because whenever I see the name Hayley I think of the Hayley from Paramore.
Author's responseSame here most of the time. But Hayley is one of my favorite names ever so I couldn't help but use it. Plus Hayley is hot and severely talented so thinking of her when reading the name isn't too awful. =)