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Suffocating
5 reviewsIt takes a look at death for you to realize that life is to short. But sometimes, it's already to late.
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Suffocating
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-04
I'll do it. If that'll make you happy. Great job on the story, as always. Do me a solid and never stop writing. Even if you stop writing here, please continue...Suffocating
(#) Obsessive-Fangirl 2011-12-04
Is this just a oneshot or are you going to make it multi-chaptered? I hope it's the latter!Suffocating
(#) xxPanicFanxx 2011-12-10
I'm seriously at a loss for words. This is just incredible. It nearly brought tears to my eyes, that's how wonderful it was. How you described everything was absolutely beautiful. Please please please continue this!Suffocating
(#) PartyPoison 2011-12-22
That was excellent. You seemed to capture and convey emotions perfectly and it’s wonderful. It’s as though not only are you showing us what the character is feeling at the moment in the story, you make the reader feel it as well. That takes some serious skills. I am at a loss when it comes to your writing. I simply do not understand how you can create such marvellous things and take what is in your mind and put them into the exact words to put the same pictures into our own minds.
Sorry, but I will not kill you.
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