"He’s just… nothing." Read, review, rate and feel my love :P
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-09 04:20:50 PMNOOO! MIKEY! DON'T DIE!!! Pweeeeaaaasse? D: Please update soon; its getting so good! I fucking mean it, your writing is so descriptive, whenever I see someone else's writing, I compare them to you. Sure, it's a pretty damn mean thing to do since very little people compare to your writing.
Author's responseThank you so sooooo sooooooooo much; it's extremely touching and uplifting to know that you think so highly of what I write even though I don't think it's all that great. I am very pleased (understatement!) that you like what I write!
I'll try to update today (as always) but I may not be able to as it's my Nan's birthday weekend and I will probably end up getting dragged to some Christmas fair.
Thank you very much for leaving such a nice review! :)
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-09 04:50:33 PMWhoa this chapter is just so brilliant. It is so well written. Mikey's last sentence completely caught me off guard. I don't want him to die! Please don't let him die Frankie. This story has me totally engrossed in it. Everyday I look forward to it! Ooooh I can't wait to see what Frankie thinks. Keep on updating please
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm extremely pleased that you thought this chapter was okay! I'm glad that you feel engrossed by the story, I was worried that it was getting kinda boring so it's a relief to know that you think otherwise!
I'll try to update later today, but it's my Nan's birthday weekend and probably end up getting dragged to to some sort of Christmas fair, so sorry if I don't manage an update today; I'll try my hardest!
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review, it really does help me write! :)
(#) dropthedaggerlaura 2011-12-09 06:38:26 PMAHHH GODAMNIT WHY CAN'T I WRITE AS GOOD AS YOU???
Author's responseWhat are you talking about?! I LOVE YOUR WRITING - IT'S FANTASTIC (especially 'Want', I adore that story)! I'd love to be able to write as well as you!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a sweet review! :)
(#) XtheXfreakX 2011-12-09 11:41:47 PMPlease please please please update soon!!! And don't kill Mikey! That would just be unethical
Author's responseI'll try to update as quickly as possible.
Killing Mikey would be quite unethical, I don't think that I could ever do that.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2011-12-10 10:10:32 AMaw that's so sad! but kinda happy, because he doesn't stutter around frank. but don't kill him off! I beg of you! update soon?
Author's responseI've just uploaded the next chapter. Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-10 04:56:07 PMThis is so great. This chapter was so amazing. I really liked the beginning. It was written in such a way that it made your readers want to know what you meant. I also really like this part. "The damage to his face might look bad, but I know for a fact that the damage to his soul is so much worse. After he’d made so much progress too!" It's true. He has made so much progress. Sure he still believed that he was worthless and ugly and that everything was his fault, but he got to a point where he could say "I'm not worthless because Gerard and Frank said I wasn't and I trust them and I trust that they'd tell me the truth so it can't be a lie." I don't believe this is something you'd make him say, it was just written to show his reasoning. Anyway, now he probably won't be able to even think about what Gerard and Frank say about his worth and it's all because of the kids in Mikey's class. I really like the fact that Mikey didn't stutter. I thought that was so clever and it was such a great way to make Frank realize that something amazing is happening. Mikey trusts him, which is what Frank wanted, but now he has to be extra careful because it's a special thing when Mikey trusts someone because he doesn't trust just anybody and his trust is a hard thing to keep. I also really like how caring Frank is. He wants nothing more than for Mikey to not get hurt anymore. He wants the kids in Mikey's class to stop hurting him. He wants them to hurt, not Mikey. Also, the last line. That came out of nowhere. I think my jaw dropped when I read that. Now I'm wondering what will happen. Like the kind of wonder where you bite your nails to try to keep your mind off of the surprising thing that happened but you still find yourself looking off into space and coming up with the worst theories. Your writing really provokes thought and emotion which is lacking in a lot of stories. This is so well written and extremely beautiful. I love it.
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm glad that you liked it!
I wasn't too sure about having Mikey not stutter so it's a relief to know that you thought it was clever.
Thnak you ever so much for leaving such a kind review; they mean the world to me! :)