(#) Heartbreak_Beauty 2011-12-11 07:54:50 AMI'll be your beta. :3
And if other people offer, you should let them beta too! More people betaing is better, I have 4 betas and my stories have improved. :3
So, this chap is so cute! When I heard you say 'two mice' I thoiught of CherCher and LilLil. xD
Sweet chap, email me anytime. :3
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-12 12:31:12 PMThis is an amazing story. It's very interesting and very original. This chapter is so good and I hate the fact that Frank's parents acted like that. The mouse part was so cute. I could imagine them at the pet store and looking at all the mice. Hope to see more, I really enjoy reading this story.