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A Grave Man

by Jestercore 2 Reviews

This was the script for a movie me and my friends were going to make. After a couple of mishaps we decided to end the project. About a group of guys trying to take back control of their lives ...

Category: Humor - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama, Humor - Characters:  - Published: 2006/06/20 - Updated: 2006/06/20 - 1356 words

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  • A Grave Man

    (#) a_writer 2006-06-20 02:26:23 PM

    Sorry that you had to give up on your movie, but I thought your opening narrative was hilarious...I'm so easily amused. =)
  • A Grave Man

    (#) Ithilwen 2006-07-01 06:56:34 PM

    Do you really need a dramatis personae when Will explains who everyone is in the opening monologue?

    Quirky and amusing.

    NITS ET AL:

    "four-fifths" needs a hyphen

    "hanged out" should be "hung out"

    "Your really a terrible person" should be "you're."

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