This was the script for a movie me and my friends were going to make. After a couple of mishaps we decided to end the project. About a group of guys trying to take back control of their lives ...
(#) a_writer 2006-06-20 02:26:23 PM
Sorry that you had to give up on your movie, but I thought your opening narrative was hilarious...I'm so easily amused. =)
(#) Ithilwen 2006-07-01 06:56:34 PM
Do you really need a dramatis personae when Will explains who everyone is in the opening monologue?
Quirky and amusing.
NITS ET AL:
"four-fifths" needs a hyphen
"hanged out" should be "hung out"
"Your really a terrible person" should be "you're."