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(#) youcanstakemyheart 2011-12-21 06:24:51 PMPLEASE FREAKING UPDATE IT SOON!!! and i know gee'll just flip out anyway...whether it's an angry flip out or a crying flip out i'm not sure...anyway, update this thing soon. PLEASE.
Author's responseI'll try to update tonight, I think there's only gonna be another two or three chapters to this and it should (hopefully) be completed by Christmas.
To be perfectly honest, I don't know how Gerard will react either; the whole plan thing went out of the proverbial window about ten chapters ago!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
(#) upinflames 2011-12-22 12:05:52 AMSyraStrange isn't feeling like herself so she sent me to check out your story. Hi; the name's Azure, nice to meet you. I fucking hate cliffhangers. It's like leaving people to die; before coming back and saying it's all a joke. It's hard to believe Gee doesn't remember a goddamn thing, I'm seriously disappointed in him. And Mikey's been through absolute shit, but he has to come out of his mind soon, because it's tearing him apart. A little disappointed in Frank as well. He needs to keep his shit straight. Do yourself a favor and continue. That way I won't have to beg and plead for you not to leave me fucking hanging. Exscuse my French; that's the way I talk to everyone. Great chapter. c:
Author's responseHi there, Azure; nice to meet you too. Please tell SyraStrange that I hope she's alright and to get well soon. :)
Sorry about the cliffhanger; I didn't mean for there to be one. It just sort of... Happened. Poor Mikey, he really has been through shit; I feel kinda evil for putting him through all of this.
I'll try to update tonight and don't worry about your French; trust me, I'm known for having a fucking foul mouth.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review; I'm glad that you liked it! :)
(#) CatscanFlyy 2011-12-22 04:49:37 AMSo I'm just gonna kill my computer cause it clicked off into somewhere as I was about to post my review >.> This was so beautiful and tradgic and I'm meant to be babysitting right now and the kid just asked me why I was crying and I was just like "Because Mikey and Frank and I can't-Gerard rgreuiriuhtiuhtr" and then he went back to watch tv. Just to let you know that when this story was finished I shall be taking Mikey home to live with me and my cat he is the cutest thing. I'll be sooooo upset when this finished the whole thing has been just too amazing and heartbreaking and my favourite story on the site and I'm using too many ands but I have lost all of my mouth words to this! please update soon, I can't take the suspence!
Author's responseTgank you very much; I'm gla that you thouht this was alright, but please don't cry!
I'm pleased that you've decided your taking Mikey home; I'm just too cruel to him and he deserves a change of luck! ;P
Thank you soooooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review; you've made me smile! :)
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-22 12:47:40 PMThis isn't boring or pointless or dragged out at all. It just seemed like you wanted to set the mood for the events in the chapter. I think the way it was written was supposed to be the same way Gerard is waiting for Frank to tell him what happened, but that could just be me. I liked how dramatic this story is, but it isn't done badly and isn't too ridiculous. It ( successfully) shows the drama in their lives and what the Way brothers have to go through with, and that it was like that even before Frank was there. This chapter is kind of dramatic too, but in a different way. There's not much dialogue in the story, just a lot of explaining of feelings and thoughts and how scared Mikey looks. The fact that all of this happens before Frank gets the chance to say anything before the chapter ended gives the reader a clue that there will probably be a lot of drama and it made me wonder what exactly was going to happen next. I think this was done very well well because it added to the feel that this was a very intense moment with a lot of emotion, and dialogue doesn't always deliver that mood. It didn't seem as if you just didn't know what to make the characters say so you just put a lot of other things. It seemed like here was a purpose for it, so this is why it's not pointless. I also liked that it was in Frank's point of view. Frank is the reason why Mikey wasn't already dead. He saved Mikey in that alley and gave him a place to stay. Saved him from Gerard who is just as emotionally troubled as Mikey. He's helped the Ways patch up their relationship a bit, they were getting better, and here they are back to square one. He saved Mikey from himself in a way. He was so insecure, wouldn't trust anybody, wouldn't speak to him for a while, but Frank was able to help him and he got better for a while too. Frank can fix them both, he's gotten them to the point where Gerard is about to be told about what he used to do to Mikey. They can get much farther, in a positive direction and Frank wants to be the person to do that. It's always interesting to see what Frank thinks about all of what happened in the story. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's really interesting and absolutely NOT boring. It's very well done, the whole story as well. Great job, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Author's responseTgank you very much; I feel very reassured by your review! I'm relieved that you don't think this story is ridiculous as that was my main worry with this; I didn't want it turning into some sort of laughable soap-opera style thing.
I agree with what you said about Gerar eig just as emotionally troubled as Mikey; I just think that Gerard's too stubborn to admit it and Mikey's too naive to think that his brother could be going through as rougher a patch as he is. Frank sees it though, so Gerard's not completely hopeless on that one.
Thank you so very much for being do lovely about my writing and taking the time to leave such a great, detailed review! :)
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-22 04:32:43 PMThis is unreal. I don't know what to say! I can't wait to see how Franks says it and how Gerard will react. Update soon. The suspense is killing me! Well done with the whole story. I think it's smashing!
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm very pleased that you like this story!
I've just uploaded the next chapter; so I hope it gives you what you want it to.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review; it really does mean a lot! :)