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A one shot about a woman's final moments in life.
(#) A-Fire-Inside12_21 2011-12-29 02:59:13 AMAll I can say is ... her lover is a dick. She's freakin dying and he doesn't wake up! oh I hope he gets it! I really do!
AND it did seem a lot like you took inspiration from Black Parade :) anyways. I like it!! :)
Author's responseHah, I know right? I mean, come on dude.
XD like I told you before, I really didn't, but i know where you're coming from with that comment.
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-22 04:23:38 AMIntensely written.
I've never actually read something so deeply outlining one's last moments on earth.
I liked it.
So sad that her lover never woke. It made it seem so... lonely, for lack of a better word.
Author's responseYeah, well, I felt like writing a one shot one day, and this kinda sprang outta nowhere. I'm pretty happy with how it turned out, even though it's sad that hardly anyone will read it because it's an original.
I was actually feeling lonely at the time, so that's probably why that feeling sort of... Showed through a bit.
Thank you for reviewing! (And honestly, I really did scream when I saw your review for Phantoms. XD I'm gonna reply to that when I can stop grinning like the Cheshire cat or hyperventilating or acting like a complete fan girl. :D)