Just me being annoying and wondering about doing a sequel... Comments and thoughts would be most helpful! :)
(#) XtheXfreakX 2011-12-25 02:12:58 PMI say hell yeah!! Merry Christmas to you too! It would be a great way to begin the year the story is amazing and its sad that its all over!!:)
Author's responseAww, thanks! I'll try to start the sequel within the next week or so; I'm kinda looking forward to writing a sequel, I've never written a Pikey before (unless you count the epilogue) so I'm excited about trying something new.
Thanks for taking the time to comment! :)
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2011-12-25 02:33:40 PMI think it'd be worth doing, just to see all the aftermath. With Gerard's temper and Frank's.. well.. loveliness, you'll be able to build up a good climax and story line. So, I think i'd read it if you did, yes.
Oh, and of course, Mikey still has few insecurities and problems.. and his love life would go down smoothly in the plot. :)
So, yeah haha. I'd read it!
Merry Christmas to you, too! :D
Author's responseThanks; it's great to know that you'd read it! I am looking forward to writing an overprotective Gerard meeting a hyper Pete. I'm not too sure of what will happen yet (and I don't want to give too much away), but I do feel sorry for Mikey and Frank getting caught in some form of crossfire...
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-25 02:41:31 PMThat would be great!!! And you are not annoying. I have nothing to do because I'm waiting for Christmas dinner and then I come across this and I'm surprised. I just thought that you changed the summary again, but when I saw that you didn't I had to come and see this. I think this idea is wonderful! I love overprotective Gerard, but if he is too overprotective that'll make you want to strangle him or something. I bet it'll be like he doesn't want Mikey to be with anybody, like they're not good enough for him. Gerard has gotten better and is loving and caring, but if he even THINKS to himself that Pete is not good enough then I will find a way into the story and say something along the lines of "You and your emotional problems are not fit enough to be deciding who Mikey should be with. It took someone who Mikey didn't even know to make Mikey realize that he wasn't worthless, and now you think you've got some sort of right to judge who is a good person for Mikey to be with." Yes, I know Gerard isn't so bad now, and he is genuinely trying, but I know how this Gerard acts, and I am not too fond of him. That's a good thing though, it means that you've developed such an attitude about this character that you've gotten people to feel something about them. I know I sound creepy, just ignore that and pretend that this is a normal comment. Anyway, if there is Frikey it should be that Mikey is already over what happened and Frank is the one that is thinking about Mikey in a way that involves Frikey. Mikey has suffered too long to think about Frank like that. Well, I don't really mean that and this is your story so you decide what the characters go through. There is no doubt in my mind that your decision will be shocking but magnificent nonetheless. I hope I haven't offended you or anything, and if I have I apologize greatly. I know some people would be like " Who does this girl think she is, telling me what to do with my story. If she wanted to write it she shouldn't thought of it first." an then they'd mutter to themselves "Stupid girl. Thinking she could go around telling people what to do." and then they'd curse me out a bit. I'm not trying to tell you what to do, I'm just voicing my opinions which do not have to be taken seriously and do not really need to be taken into consideration at all. It just feels nice to know that they are out there. Anyway, this is a wonderful idea and I hope you have a happy holiday.
Author's responseI'm glad that you think this idea is alright and relieved that you don't find me annoying! :P
I'm pleased that you like the idea; I love writing Gerard as overprotective (as you can probably tell) and I'm looking forward to writing about his reaction to his baby brother (who's gone through hell) having his first boyfriend. If I were Pete I'd start running. I'm thinking if writing it so that Pete is naturally flirty (but by no means nasty or a cheat) and Gerard not liking it a bit/just not liking Pete at all purely because he's with Mikey and Gerard really doesn't want Mikey to end up hurt. Well, we all know how well that worked last time...
I completely agree with your thoughts on Frikey, I doubt that it will come from Mikey and it won't play a huge role in the storyline (if included at all). I don't think that Frikey as a proper pairing in this would work; I want Frank and Mikey to be best friends and for it to not be awkward between them. However, I might have Frank think a little about his feelings for Mikey at some point in the story. I dunno. But thanks for helping me with that, I wasn't sure about the Frikey element but you've helped me to think it through.
You haven't offended me at all, in any way; in fact you've helped me out a lot and been very nice about my ideas. Exactly the opposite of offensive; thank you very much for taking the time to respond to my author's note, it really does mean a lot that you'd take the time to comment!
Thank you very much for helping me and have a merry Xmas!! :D
(#) asialovesrevenge 2011-12-25 03:11:15 PMyes you should do a sequel! this was one of the best fanfiction I've ever read (it was pretty much perfect) :D go for it dude!
Author's responseAww, thank you very much; I'm sooo pleased that you liked this story! I think that I will do a sequel; this was too fun to write not to!
Thanks for taking the time to comment! :)
(#) CourtneyAlerion 2011-12-25 03:16:44 PMOMFG!! Yes!! When I read the last chapter I thought that you should do a sequel and I was gonna request but then I thought "omg she probably wouldn't :(" but you are!! :D or it's in consideration bit PLEASSEEE DO IT! :3
Author's responseIt's almost a certain that a sequel will happen, I've got some ideas and I really want to see how they play out.
I'm sorry if I come across as the sort of person who doesn't listen to requests/reviews, I would love to hear from people telling me what they want to read, so please never think that I won't listen should you have a suggestion; I'd love to hear from you and anyone else with suggestions!
Thank you very much for taking the time to respond! :)
- YEAAHHHH! :DDDDD SOUNDS FANTASTIC PLEAAASE MAKE IT HAPPEN IT'D MAKE MY NEW YEAR!
i've never read a Pikey before so it should be interesting for me to see how it turns out YAYAY
HOPE YOU HAD A BRILL CHRISTMAS!! XX
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm soooo pleased that you like the sequel idea! I think that a sequel is pretty much certain for the new year.
There are some really good Pikeys on this site (there are two amazing ones in my favorites on my profile page) it is a really cute pairing, you should deffinitely check out some Pikeys!
I had a great Xmas, thanks; my mum being the awesomeness that she is is sending me to America (I live in England) in June so that I can see New Jersey!! I hope that you had an amazing Christmas too!
Thank you for taking the time to comment! :)
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-25 06:02:22 PMThat sounds awesome! You should definitley write it. Please?! I love your stories! Merry Christmas to you too!
Author's responseI'm really glad that you like the sound of a sequel, I've never done a sequel before and this storyline had some things that I really wanna toy with in a sequel so I think I can say that a sequel will deffinitely be arriving in around the next week or so. Thank you very much for taking the time to comment! :)
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2011-12-25 07:42:38 PMif you made a sequel, you could consider it a christmas present to a girl you've never even met! (me!) that would be awesome! i loved this story and was sad when it ended. now i wanna go back and read it all again! happy MCRmas! I mean christmas...close enough. oxo
Author's responseThank you very much, it's really nice to know that you actually want a sequel; it really does mean a lot! This sequel is almost deffinitely happening, I hope that it makes an alrighT MCRmas (love it!) present! :D
I remember you talking bout Gerard possibly not liking Pete and that whole situation in a response to a comment last chapter, and I think that would be great! I'm so excitedd :D
Author's responseI'm glad that you think the whole Gerard-not-liking-Pete thing is a good idea. I'm just about (literally just about to open a word document) to start planning the sequel. You can expect more Mikey-tears, angry Gerards, worried Franks and, well, Pete Wentz. A Pete Wentz who should probably start running from aforementioned angry Gerard around about now... ;P
Anyways, I'm so pleased that this is something you're excited about (I kinda am too) and the first chapter will probably be up around New Year's Day or New Year's Eve. It probably won't be anywhere near as long as this story (I'm thinking twelve chapters max most likely), but it probably will be just as over-dramatic/depressing although I will be making an effort to make it a little less heavy than this.
Thank you very much for taking the time to comment! :)
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2011-12-26 04:33:11 PMI don't go to ficwad for a few days around Christmas and I miss the ending of a story I've followed since chapter one! Anyway, I highly approve of a pikey sequel, just don't forget the happiness when you're writing it! Happy stories now, I'm overly depressed from reading a chapter of this every day xD But this story was amazingly written and I can't deny my love for depressing fics, so just... I LOVE YOU.
Author's responseI'm pleased that you approve of the idea of a Pikey sequel, I planne it out last night and I think that it will be a lot happier than this story. There will still deffinitely be some dark/depressing parts (maybe a little bit of graphic violence too), but there will certainly be a lot more happy parts to this.
I'm really sorry that this story was so depressing, I don't really know how/when that happened. The sequel will have tears and blood playing a big role, but not for too long and with plenty of Pete Wentz light-relief (hopefully) evening it out.
I'm sooooo glad that you think this story was written alright and sorry for it being such a depressing, twisted piece of madness.
Thank you very much for taking the time to comment; I LOVE YOU TOO. ;P