Sequel to Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way. Over a year has passed, and Gerard is reunited with his daughter Gia. She has a lot to hide, and Gerard finds that she has grown up and changed.
Ah, wow. Gerard's actually considered it and come up with a reasonable explanation. That's great! But I feel really bad for both of them.. :(
The tension was really vivid in this chapter and so was the description. Good job :)
Brilliant. I love the new story. Well written as usual. I don't know how you do it but I'm just as excited for a new chapter now as I was in the previous story.
Loved this chapter, you're a really good writer. I feel sorry for Gia, I've said this before, but she really has been through a lot. Can't wait for your next update!
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