“Welcome to New Jersey, Emma,” My dad smiled, turning to face us as Emma re-gathered her previously discarded luggage, more of her crimson hair flopping into her already covered, black-rimmed e...
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-01-10 10:31:15 AMI'm liking this :D Be sure to write the rest of it :3xx
Author's responseThanks so much! And I'm planning to write this story until the end - I think this story is gonna be my main priority for a while! :)
I've never finished one of my stories before, and i'd really like to xD
Thanks for the review!~
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-01-11 04:03:27 AMBless Mikey.
Anyway, this chapter was good because we get to see Gerard's thoughts and because of the fact he seemed the most welcoming besides her Dad. I bet they're gonna get pretty close. Good so far - well written and such. Good job :D
Author's responseHaha! I had to include his adorable awkwardness somewhere! Maybe I should write something about his knees :')
Thank you so much! I'm so glad at least one person understands what I was meant to portray in this chapter! I was a bit worried nobody would understand haha
Thank you very much, and thanks again for the review! It made me smile :')