Categories > Books > Harry Potter > Phoenix Ashes
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2 ReviewsHermione makes a bad deal.
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Phoenix Ashes
(#) midnight_star22 2012-01-15 03:17:19 PM
Nooo not Hermione!! ):Author's response
Ah well... it's all a part of the vision! Besides, had I picked anyone else, it probably wouldn't have been as interesting.... -
Phoenix Ashes
(#) Rob409 2012-02-02 06:50:36 AM
its a repitionAuthor's response
I'm not sure what you mean by "it's a repition." That isn't constuctive at all unless you mean the idea is repetitive? I haven't seen it but once ever. That my chapters are repetitive? I thought I'd done a good job making individual personalities.
If you're going to leave a review, you should probably leave something for me to improve.