Oh my fucking word - this story is AMAZING!!! I just read the whole thing through and wow! I actually love it.
It's really original, and I love the format of it! My only complaint is that it can sometimes be difficult to understand who's POV it is. And that the chapters are short. I suppose that's two things, but this really is great. I'll be waiting on updates!
Thank you so much.
Well it telly only swithches from Frank's pov to third person, but I can make it easier.
Yea, I'm trying to make it longer, and if you look, each chapter is longer than the last.
I write this stuff on my phone, and it looks long, but ends up being short.
I love your story, Back in the day, I like spazz when you update it. ^_^