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The horrible news

this is my first story and i know it not that good but i hope you like it :)

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres:  - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2012/01/14 - Updated: 2012/01/14 - 1017 words - Complete

Reviews

• The horrible news

  (#) Gerardwayiscute 2012-01-14 05:25:56 AM

  I cried. They both died and think about no more MCR. This was really good.

  Author's response

  Thank you :))

• The horrible news

  (#) xXLaylaxX 2012-01-14 02:20:11 PM

  MICHELLE! [tackle hugs you] It's Layla =]
  
  Aww it ended so sadly =[ I loved it, so moving =D

  Author's response

  thx for the review =)))

• The horrible news

  (#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-02-25 06:36:21 PM

  O.o woah. That's sad... and kind of bipolar, Frank. Whatever. We all go off our rocker at some point, I guess.
  
  Anyway, I really liked it. I think it would be better with proper grammar and being blocked out, but hey, it was still a good story so I can deal. (I am more picky than my Grandmother, the Goddess of picky...)

  Author's response

  first im aware i have bad grammar hahaha and i dont know how to block it out and what does bipolar mean ??? hahaha but thanks for the review
  :DDD

• The horrible news

  (#) StandUpAndScream 2013-01-20 09:32:30 PM

  It's so sad :( Poor Gerard and Frankie :(
  Paragraphing is your best friend when you're writing.
  New speaker, new line! So of Gerard's talking and then Frank begins to talk, you start a new line. Gah I'm terrible at explaining things D:
  Capital letters are God too! :)
  
  

  Author's response

  i know my grammar is terrible XD

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