this is my first story and i know it not that good but i hope you like it :)
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-02-25 06:36:21 PMO.o woah. That's sad... and kind of bipolar, Frank. Whatever. We all go off our rocker at some point, I guess.
Anyway, I really liked it. I think it would be better with proper grammar and being blocked out, but hey, it was still a good story so I can deal. (I am more picky than my Grandmother, the Goddess of picky...)
Author's responsefirst im aware i have bad grammar hahaha and i dont know how to block it out and what does bipolar mean ??? hahaha but thanks for the review
(#) StandUpAndScream 2013-01-20 09:32:30 PMIt's so sad :( Poor Gerard and Frankie :(
Paragraphing is your best friend when you're writing.
New speaker, new line! So of Gerard's talking and then Frank begins to talk, you start a new line. Gah I'm terrible at explaining things D:
Capital letters are God too! :)
Author's responsei know my grammar is terrible XD