Time for clubbing at Spicy! Filled with snogging, dancing, and Mystery Dudes! Read, rate, and review please! :DDD
(#) MCRmy_Chick 2012-01-20 08:57:07 PMHaggsjxdshstabczdv! I love it! xD Can't wait for more, especially now that we know Ray's secret. You, my friend, are epic!
I salute you!
.... With Oreos! :D
Author's responseFuck yeah, Oreos! :DD
Yeah, Ray's secret is out, can't wait to write up the next chapter.
Heehee, thanks, being called epic is a great thing. :)
Thanks for the review!!!
(#) UsernameGoesHere 2012-01-20 09:31:29 PMThis should very much so be in the last chapter, but I just wanted to say...Bob's philosophy on sleeping anywhere? I read that and it was like I had an epiphany or something, no lie.
Great chapter, and, like last time (because I'm a repetitive, hypocritical disaster), UPDATE SOON! :D (
Author's responseAhh, epiphany's...... they make me feel smart. So I hope you felt smart too. xD
Thanks, and I don't mind repetitiveness, seeing as I do the same. xD
I shall update as soon as I can!
(#) SyraStrange 2012-01-20 09:59:59 PMZOMG. I heard oreos. Too bad they weren't for me.. :( I know I'm not a prude but whenever someone's like, "Damn, that's yummy. " I have to blush and giggle like I'm some goddamn schoolgirl. (Maybe it's cuz I am...) Ray needed to embrace his inner gay, I'm glad he did. YOU MENTIONED ME!!! :D I feel special. (Ha, just like everyone else...) Update soon! You, and your crazy good updating skills... I wish I some of that. ;D
I bathe in the blinding glory of your great writing skills. While eating skittles. And doin stupid laundry. Yes.
Author's responseHere, you can have some. hands you oreos That is a privilege of being a friend of mine. xD
Well, yummy is a great way to express how you feel. For example, 'Hey, look at that guy!' 'He's so /yummy/!' (get it? :D)
Ray finally embraced his inner gayness! I hope you figured out who with.....
And I mentioned you because you're awesome for reviewing every chapter!
I'll try and update soon, promise. That little sentence on the bottom made me laugh, you surely must be kidding. (Right? :P)
(Skittles= Epic goodness Laundry= It can fuck off.)
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-01-20 10:01:30 PMI liked it... Though I really hate the word boners... I just shuddered, in case you can't magically see moi through the computer...
So, like yea. Fucking awesome dude.
Author's responseI love freaking people out by saying 'Boner!' It's fun for me xD Sorry you don't like that word though..... I'll try to think of other ones, like erection for instance.......
Thanks, appreciate the review dude.
(#) brandedforeverlame 2012-01-21 01:26:26 AMyou soooo do not suck at writing make-out scenes! that was awesome! can't wait for the next chapter. :D
Author's responseThanks, I was seriously doubting that part of the chapter... seeing as that isn't my strongest writing skill.
Thank you sooo much for the review! :D
(#) MCR_ROCK_RHCP 2012-01-21 07:35:03 AMJakshslsbsksvwiehqowbzkansvdheiqvwjbaba
Wow. I love you. In a non creepy wu of course. I love this story. It makes me laugh so much. And I jut love you.
Author's responseAhh, love you too! xD I get it, it's in a total non creepy way. The writer-reader love! The story also loves you, it appreciates all the love it is receiving!
And Frankie! And Gerard! And Ray! And Bob! But Mikey is EPIC! :)
Thanks for the review!
(#) benzedrine_barbie 2012-01-21 09:27:41 AMThis was HAWT, nice work! And thanks for the shout-out, you made me feel fucking famous! Did you read the Halo Files? Let me know if I should keep going, I'm kinda dubious...anyway great job, I love this story a lot :) xo b_b
Author's responseThanks, my first make-out thing ever!
B-bu0but you are FUCKING FAMOUS! Your stories are awesome! Of course you should keep going, it's amazing!
Thank you so much for the review, i really appreciate this.
- MARTIN! Ray was kissing Martin right? Hahah Ray ray's gonna do the 'dance with no pants' with a big hairy dude lol xD
I love you (in a totally creepy way)
Oh and you mentioned me! lol
Author's responseAll will be revealed my friend, all will be revealed soon enough.
Love you too! And yes, you were mentioned. lol :D
Thanks for the review!