I think it’s hope. The brand new, untouched, untainted beginnings of hope.
(#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2012-01-29 12:30:59 PM:D OMFG THIS ISNT EVEN REAL!
do you know, i actually rate your chapters before i read them because i can
also because i know that your chapter will ALWAYS be beyond awesome...
anyway, back to commenting on the story: woo! go frank! yeah this was awesome. i wanted to pull one of those chav "i told you so" tantrums at gerard. who knew frank could be so badass? except from you. obviously.
anyhoo this is awesome and i seriously recommend updating soon if you want to retain all of your body parts
Author's responseEeee, thank you! I love your reviews and the fact you always take the time to give me a detailed review...they always make me go 'aaawwww' and smile like an idiot. I'm so glad you like my work- I shall update as soooon as I can! thanks again :D
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-01-29 12:31:33 PMThis is awesome :D I wish Gerard wasn't such a dick. He is a big penis with a small one. I hope he gets his comeuppance :D xx
Author's responseYay, glad you like it! Haha nice description- I'd have to agree with you there...for now- things may change xD thanks so much for reviewing!
(#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2012-01-29 12:34:16 PMoh shit i forgot to ask! if its not asking too much, do mind checking out my one-shot? i would really appreciate it (: (http://www.ficwad.com/story/180239 )
Author's responseI'd love to! I'll check it out later tonight and review it as soon as I can (: thanks again for your awesome review :D
(#) LatherTheBlood 2012-01-29 12:37:55 PMASDFGHYTTDFVDFJGBDXKJVBKZDHJVB, why you so good at story writing? :) twas amazing. No other words can discribe this other than amzingly cool.
Author's responseAwww, thank you so much! I'm smiling like an idiot at my computer screen now, and my family are looking strangely at me :L thanks so much for sticking with this and reviewing- I'm glad you liked the chapter :D
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-01-29 12:41:55 PMWords can't describe this chapter. It's beautiful and perfect. I love how Frank stood up for himself, how Mikey stopped the fight, how we were left hanging at the end, how we could feel the tension. It was incredible, absolutely unbelievable. Truly amazing.
This.. I can't.. I always feel like my reviews aren't enough and I don't know what to say! But it just.. you astound me to a point where I don't know what to say! Ah, I feel like the world's shittest reviewer:')
But this is amazing.
And I'ma leave now.
Oh, right, yeah. I forgot something..
Author's responseOhmyfrankingfrerard, thank you so much! I always love your reviews- they make me smile crazily at my computer screen and consequently my family to give my strange looks :L But...yeah- it really means a lot that you take the time to really tell me what you think of my chapters, so thank you. Seriously, this review has cheered me up so much...I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I'll update as soon as I can.
thank you so much again- this review really made my day.
p.s. You're not a shitty reviewer- I always look forward to your reviews :L
- Love this!
I'm so happy Frank stood up to Gerard, he acts like such a douchebag. But I just know he can be sweet and kind and shit. Frank is acting all out of character, but in a great way. Hopefully his new lil' bit of self-confidence doesn't fade away, he was an awesome little fucker in this chapter.
And Mikey..... well I feel happy for Mikey as well. I was like 'whoa' when he told Gerard to shut up. Yeah Mikey! Speak up! Like in my story xD
Hmmm, that was kind of long. Sorry for kind of rambling haha. Can't wait for the next chapter, this is just amazing.