Episode 6 Notes:
http://ficwad.com/story/170338 --The Only Hope For Me is You –bloodbunny15
it’s about a slew of MCR peoples and a couple OC’s going to boarding school together. Peeve of mine: not sticking with your tense. (Ex. Past Tense: I fucked at Janis. Present Tense: I am fucking Janis. Future Tense: I will fuck Janis). Chapters are extremely short. This probably wasn’t intended, but I loved the alliteration here: “bags onto the bus boarding school bloody brilliant”. Grammar stuff: correct capitalization, sentence structure, etc. need a little bit of work. Ahm…plot is a bit lacking. Try to split your paragraphs up so that they’re not all smashed together, if you can.
http://www.ficwad.com/story/174785 --Skittles and Cat Eyes-- SyraStrange
Some weird AU Gerard is a cat and Frank is housesitting and Gramma Elena turned Gee-bear into a kitty, and Frank and Gee-kitty have a weird bestiality kind of feelings going on. IDK where you should go from here…Perhaps have GerardTheCat begin to lose his kitty qualities and start being more human, slowly but surely so that at the end, he can go home to his mommy and have a normal boy-boy love with Frank?
http://www.ficwad.com/story/117647 --Evan--GerardwayisSex (South Park)
It’s about the goths of South Park, and the way Evan feels. It’s actually very touching; one of the most original things I’ve read in ages. It’s sad to see that Finchis no longer writing on ficwad, but I think she’s on deviantart now. I’m tempted to check more of her stuff out when I’ve got the time.
http://ficwad.com/story/180347 --How Could You?!-- XEvil_AngelX
Dark shit. Seriously, man. Like, relatable. I wanted to go into the story and scoop Ryley up in my arms and huggle her, to stop her from doing bad things. Superb plot and concept. The grammar skills and some of the spelling is a bit sketchy, but that’s just technical stuff. The plot’s great. Very good. I’m pleased with it.
http://www.ficwad.com/story/180577 --You Have to Have Fun in Greece—AdnarimSmada
Some weird fucked up thing with Gerard having sex with other hims. I’ve read something that had the same concept—Gerard clones having sexy time with Gerard—but this is AdnarimSmada, we’re talking about. Shit is fucking brill.