(#) Moriyuki_Sama 2006-06-25un realistic. hmm...normally i wrte something nice about stories, but this one was very unrealistic. patricks girlfriends name is rachel, not "cait" and hes not cuddly at all. and he doesnt know how to work a tv either...XD
Author's responseSorry, I didn't know that. But it is called fiction for a reason. The story goes how I want it to. Sorry if it doesn't go your way.
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