Lou returns to spend the day with the Panic! boys, but this time, she brings Yankee with her. And what's up with Spencer? Part 1 of 2.
- Paranoia_Destroya109 said exactly the same thing I was gonna say.... But oh well. I love this story, please update!
Author's responseHmm, bit of telepathy going on there! XD
Thank you. Update will hopefully be in two weeks, on the 15th, and then I'll be alternating weeks from there and updating my other story on the week I dont update this one. Hope you can wait that long!
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-02-04 01:48:38 AMUgh, stupid rating points. I have none right now but I'll be back to rate it later!
I just love the whole blind idea you had with this. It's perfect. I love all of her other senses being touched on, especially hearing.
I love this so much!
And I love the weight jokes regarding Ryan. Too funny, haha.
O.o Ryan so close to her? Man, serious nerves put on fire there... and Spencer's supposed clumsiness? Perfect.
I can't wait for more. This is one of my favorite fanfics everrr.
It drips originality and has so much detail.
Author's responseblushes Wow. Seriously, I think you just became my favourite reviewer. Can I pay you to say stuff to me like that all the time? XD
Thank you; I'm relived. Sometimes I worry that I'm spending too much time describing things and not focusing on her sense, so I'm glad that you feel that way.
Ahh, come on, we all love making fun of the skinny little bitch, don't we? ;D More weight references in the next chapter. (Specifically, gummy bears, if you get my meaning. :) )
Grins Had to make him jealous somehow. And what better way than to use his best friend who happens to be one of the two most sought after guys in the band?
Whoa... EVER? Holy crap... 0.0 Well, if its that good, spread the word! Tell ya friends. (joking, you dont have to.) Did I mention that you're my favourite reviewer?? XD
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-02-05 01:15:24 AMRated!
No, it's perfect how you describe things. I honestly don't think that people spend the time doing so often enough. I'm really bad about skipping details.
Oh yes! Hehe, I'm excited to read it. ;)
I never understood that! I actually think Jon is the hottest in the group. X.x But not a lot of people seem to be fans of him as intensely as I am.
EVER! I shall spread the word. =) Thank you. (: The same goes to you actually!
Author's responseThank you! :3
It's a fine line to tread, I guess. Sometimes people leave a lot of things out, but sometimes they put too much in. I started a really good fanfic that I kinda just gave up reading because she just put too much detail in that I ended up just skimming through lightly. I don't like doing that. :/
Jon's funny; I love him. He is the totally awesome. I hate reading stories that have him and Spencer as background characters. It's like, hello, they're in the band too. They're just as important. That's why I'm planning to write a Jon fic after this and Please Save Me.
Aww, thank you. Gah, look at this, ya making me blush again! :D
(#) morgansrainbow 2012-02-08 11:35:46 AMI Love this soo much!
It's really sweet and well detailed, probably the most original story I've read on here!
You have a great writing style!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Please update soon!!
Author's responseLove with a capital 'L'! Thats something. :3
And again, with the originality comment. Thank you so much. It's good to know that I'm doing something right! XD
Hah, someone once told me it was 'so fancy!' I feel like I'm saying thank you a lot, so I'll just throw it in there again. Thank you. Its reviews like yours which make me want to continue the story (not for my sake, for others) and really enjoy writing it.
Update will be next week.
(#) shortstacklover 2012-02-08 08:50:50 PMHahaha just rated this story hot cause I think Ryan's smoking XD tanks fir putting Ryan in there for me :3 hehe
Author's responsesnorts Yeah. You would say something like that, wouldn't you? XD Especially seeing as it's Fever era.
Ya welcome. What else are friends for??