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This Is The First Thing
14 ReviewsFrerard. My first song fic EVER.
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This Is The First Thing
(#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2012-07-15 09:22:28 AM
This is the first story in a long while that has actually brought tears to my eyes. Your spelling and grammar is excellent, and the plot line is amazing. The only think I have to say is the POV's get a little confusing at the end, but everything else was great. Thank you for posting an amazing story on here. It seems there aren't that many these days(:Author's response
Thank you so much, that really means something coming from someone who actually HAS an appreciation of grammar (do they exist on this site? Apparently they do! :O) just keep in mind it's all in Frank's POV (I think. Can't actually remember.) Thanks for such a lovely review and thank you for reading. -
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(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-08-13 04:40:31 PM
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!! I almost cried!!! It was beautiful!!! -
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(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-08-14 02:35:30 AM
@GreenDay Gerard's point of view. It's all in Gerard's point of view. I'm such a fucking spaz.
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(#) aweirdtree 2013-03-08 09:56:36 PM
hey so, uh, i know i already reviewed this like a year ago but here's the thing. this fic got me into listening to YMAS and dear jesus i'm so fucking grateful for that. seriously. also, this story is fucking beautiful; it's actually in my reclist and is also pretty much the only song fic i've ever really liked. so...
THANK.
YOU.
(also because i'm an ungrateful little shit i'm not going to offer you a favour for this but actually going to ask for one; have you thought about writing more song fics? because, you know, i've wanted to read a Frerard based on Crash (by YMAS) for so long and i just thought that you would be the perfect author for that. anyhow, keep up the awesome.)