(#) ReddyDevil 2012-02-11 02:38:42 AM
Hah, see this is where SuperSpencer'sMum would come in and find Ryan and save him. And she could probably fix Brendon while shes at it, too, come to think of it. (And maybe even Ronnie Winter might make a random cameo? hint hint XD RJA fans unite!)
Like another chapter previously, there were a lot of things that you could probably fix. I'm guessing your sister didn't have time to read it or something? Just words without one or two letters, a few repeated words and even a word left out of a sentance one time, but I still got what you were trying to say.
Haha, if only those employees knew the truth! XD
Okay, so what did you think of Rissa or Riss?
Yes, I'm from Australia. Where are you? Hah, didn't I tell you that I'm telepathic? XD
I'm glad. I get annoyed when people don't review my own stories (especially one particular one; I know people are reading it - close to 500 reads/views - but the only people who comment are my friends) so I like to think that if I review a story and review it, it will encourage the authors to review others somehow. And besides, it's also a way of getting my name out there, and as a result, my stories read.