by Kaleidoscope_Eyes
3 Reviews
Category: Panic! At The Disco -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Humor - Characters: -
Published: 2012/02/15 - Updated: 2012/07/27 - 949 words
Reviews
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(#) ReddyDevil 2012-02-15 08:55:58 PM
Even though nothing really went on in this chapter, I still found it kinda interesting. Ooh, leaving her keys somewhere? That's gonna open up a whole new world full of opportunities to interact with the guys. XD
Again, there were a few grammatical mistakes that I found, mainly to do with punctuation. Maybe that's just because I'm a punctuation nazi when it comes to read fanfics, I dunno. But still, it didn't affect the chapter too much. If it's something you're really worrie about though, maybe you should get someone to read through the chapter and edit it before you post it. I think I mentioned that in my other review. Anyway, I cant wait to find out what goes on next! :D
- Mezza
Author's response
Yeah, I know lol. I swear, this story is going somewhere! Lol I'm glad you found it interesting!
Maybe you'd like to do it? I'd appreciate that very much :)
Thanks for reviewing again!
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(#) ReddyDevil 2012-02-17 03:30:13 PM
I'd be happy to beta for you if you want me to. Do you want my email address? I'll stick it up on my profile page again for you.
Author's response
Yay! I'll send you an email once I get on my computer. I'm on my e-reader right now.
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"I’ve got my own personal math slave" something I need to get myself... If I wasn't already getting good grades in math. Oh! maybe I'll be a math slave- I mean tutor for one of my friends!!! muahahaha... oh wait... NO! NO I TAKE THAT BACK!!! NO ME BEING A MATH SLAVE!!!!! OR TUTOR!!! espically not with my friends!! who knows what they'd make me do!
Author's response
Dani sweetheart, you make me laugh so much omg! I love you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)