First story! Frikey! You made your choice. Why would I take you back? Because I love you.
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-03-07 04:51:42 PMI loved the plot! This was a great first story. I love Frikeys. You're a great writer and I hope you post more stuff soon!
Author's responseThank you! That means so much to me. You are one of my favourite writers and I love that you think it was good! I wouldn't say I'm a great writer but I might write some more stories. Thank you for reviewing!! :)
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-03-13 04:37:23 PMI think that this is really, really clever and extremely atmosphereic, especially the ending. It may be short, but I think that just adds to the powerful impact and overall effect of the story. Fantastic job and I sincerely hope that you write more like this.
Well done! :D
Author's responseThank you so much!!! You're so nice. I was trying to extend it a bit but I'm glad you think the length was fine. I've been thinking of more one shots and hopefully have one up soon. Thank you for reviewing!
(#) killjoy_blackrose 2012-04-23 11:51:53 AMman this is really good...almost brought a tear to my eye there. keep them stories a-coming, lad.
Author's responseThank you! I'm glad you liked it. I hope it wasn't good sad. Thanks for reviewing! I shall have a chapter up tonight :)