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You Said Goodbye Before you Said Hello

by KobraBlaze 3 Reviews

First story! Frikey! You made your choice. Why would I take you back? Because I love you.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2012/03/07 - Updated: 2012/03/08 - 465 words - Complete

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  • You Said Goodbye Before you Said Hello

    (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-03-07 04:51:42 PM

    I loved the plot! This was a great first story. I love Frikeys. You're a great writer and I hope you post more stuff soon!
    OXO

    Author's response

    Thank you! That means so much to me. You are one of my favourite writers and I love that you think it was good! I wouldn't say I'm a great writer but I might write some more stories. Thank you for reviewing!! :)
  • You Said Goodbye Before you Said Hello

    (#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-03-13 04:37:23 PM

    I think that this is really, really clever and extremely atmosphereic, especially the ending. It may be short, but I think that just adds to the powerful impact and overall effect of the story. Fantastic job and I sincerely hope that you write more like this.

    Well done! :D

    Author's response

    Thank you so much!!! You're so nice. I was trying to extend it a bit but I'm glad you think the length was fine. I've been thinking of more one shots and hopefully have one up soon. Thank you for reviewing!
  • You Said Goodbye Before you Said Hello

    (#) killjoy_blackrose 2012-04-23 11:51:53 AM

    man this is really good...almost brought a tear to my eye there. keep them stories a-coming, lad.
    peace, k

    Author's response

    Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I hope it wasn't good sad. Thanks for reviewing! I shall have a chapter up tonight :)

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