*2012 REVISION* Chaos theory: a nargle flaps its wings in China, and Luna responds differently to Harry during their conversation before the leaving feast in OoTP. H/L/Hr.
- This story is an excellent one so far, and I hope you will continue with the quality you currently have. I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future, keep up the great work :)
Author's responseThanks for the review. I would have liked to keep posting chapters here, but it's just to difficult to keep the chapters linked to each other, and after three attempts and a lot of time wasted I've given up. You can read the story on the following link though. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7808517/1/Thoughts_of_Pudding_2012
- It really is a great story and I agree with you. This site is not user friendly. Trying to follow a story is clunky and not very assuring as it gives no feedback. Reviewing is the same.
I do appreciate, and keep coming back for this reason, that they do not censor the dickens out of every story like FFN has been doing.