I had to split it into two videos, or it woulda been like half an hours long.
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-03-15 04:44:55 PMI think the past present and future lesson was my favorite part xD oh! (crawls through the interweb to you) here's your award for figuring out the Blind thing! And um, could you review my story It Would Seem I'm Going to Hell? (If you do you'll probably give another lesson that involves the times you fucked Janet, though, so warning)
Hm... Hero, by Shiwoggi?
I wanted to say, also, that I think doing this is really helping Fiwad as a community... So yeah. Bye! I await the next video, they amuse me greatly and allow me to rot my brain xD
(#) Sleeping7Beast 2012-03-15 05:39:48 PMHiya :D I was wondering if you could review my story "A Lunatics Prize' ^_^ I'm currently reediting it and changing a few things up, but it's one of my finished stories, and i'd like an honest review on it please ??? And if you get around to it, the story i'm working on right now 'Cancer Darling' maybe you could tell me somethings i might need to work on or something i shouldn't do to make it predictable or whatever!
Thank you very much.
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-03-16 02:43:34 PMHaha thank you
I know about my grammar, though it's not really an excuse I can use on a writing site I'm actually dyslexic so when people tell me that the grammar is dodgy I kind of go 'oh yeah sure I'll fix that' then bumble around a bit with it till it looks right in my head and decide it's done, I have no clue what I'm doing, like at all.
I shall be asking my friend to beta for me now I've introduced her to the wonderful world of fanfiction.
Thanks again! ALSO The user:It's from a band Amy Can Flyy cause they were my favourite band at the time of making my account and because I fucking love cats..
- Oh, and I know you said you're leaving, but if you're still gonna do reviews, which you said you would on your page, would you do this one? It was a collab between me and Grawr. The paragraphing is bad, and I would go fix it if I could get into the account.
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-09 08:57:32 AMHi, would you be able to review my new story, Translations of Blood? It's got 4 chapters, but the first two are really short, so it's only about 7,000 words altogether so far. I'd really value your opinion on it.