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When My Baby Shot Me Down
(#) PartyPooperX 2012-03-04 10:43:57 AM
ilovehimilovehimilovehimilovehimilovehimilovehim I LOVE HIM!!!
My dream husband ^_^ This is immense already! I mean PROPER good; I have a gooood feeling about this one ;)
But then I have a good feeling about all your other shit, so...
I'm so happy. You wrote a gangster fic in the 1920s with fedora hats and suits and ohmygod i need to sit down...Author's response
I had a strange feeling you would approve. ;) But really you shouldn't be reading this, how old are you again missy?? Then again, I'm pretty sure some of those thoughts in that big, big head of yours should be rated NC17... -
When My Baby Shot Me Down
(#) saze97 2012-03-04 11:03:42 AM
ahhh that was so good!!!! it's such a good idea!
i can totally imagine mcr as 20s gangsters, apart from gerard, he would be to much of a wimp
update soon!Author's response
Yeah, I kinda had to introduce some artistic licence in making Gerard a little tougher. HAHA imagine YOU as a gangster?? Jokes man, jokes. -
When My Baby Shot Me Down
(#) Haze 2012-03-04 11:10:28 AM
Gerard? Guns? Gerard shooting guns? Pardon me while I snort into my cereal.
Anyway, I like it a lot so far. It's a great change of pace for you. Violence! Speakeasies! I was half expecting Gerard to come out with an 'old sport.' I'm looking forward to the rest of it. (:
- HazeAuthor's response
Aw now come on! I'm sure Gerard would make an amazing gun-wielding mobster. Sure, he might have to squeeze his eyes shut and repeat "think happy thoughts, think happy thoughts!" under his breath but still...
Yeah, it is different to what I've posted before on this site. Partly because I'm getting bored of that conformist shizz, partly because I don't want people thinking I just write teen angst. xp thanks for reviewing, it means a lot! -
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(#) CosmicZombie 2012-03-06 11:49:45 AM
This is really good so far...very different from your usual stuff, but you still pulled it off brilliantly.
Just read your response to the review above and laughed out loud, because muttering 'think happy thoughts' with his eyes shut sounds EXACTLY like what he'd do! xD
But yeah, this is great, and I'm liking the new Gerard character...update soon?
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
Thank you! I've just had this idea for a while and I can't think of an excuse not to write it up anymore. I don't expect anyone to read it but ah well.
Poor Gerard! Does no one have faith in him?? D: lol will try to update soon. -
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(#) MCRmy_Chick 2012-03-08 12:12:41 AM
This is fantastic! The pacing's great, the dialogue's realistic, and the description is absolutely fabulous! Good work! I'm adding this one to alerts. :)
- BenAuthor's response
Thank you! I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible, a difficult feat considering I wasn't actually alive at the time. :/ Thanks for reviewing! -
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(#) Sarahkilljoykid 2012-03-08 11:56:45 AM
I loved it! You are a great writer! Please hurry up and update? I want to read more!
-Sarah xxAuthor's response
Aw thank you but I'm really not compared to some of the incredible others on this site. :/ Will update soon though! -
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(#) Venomizer 2012-03-12 10:37:36 AM
This is really interesting so far, and I love these kind of stories, looking forward to an update:)Author's response
Thanks for reading! Will update soon. -
When My Baby Shot Me Down
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-06-19 11:23:25 AM
Gerard I believe in you! I can see him as a more believable gunslinger to Frank or Ray. But Bob, Bob probably is in the mafia - I mean I can only assume that's where he went.
Anyway I'm now being forced to ask myself just why I wasn't reading this before JesusChrist Like fo real it's awesome.. nyagh on I go