Harry's Order friends start to piece together his disappearance.
(#) rfdn 2012-03-16 09:20:12 PM
No this still works well and follows the majority of the tone of previous chapters.
(#) Cateagle 2012-03-25 02:20:19 PM
This chapter worked well and flows nicely from the previous ones. I suspect Lucius is going to have a difficult time getting Harry since there's no real trace around of "Harry Potter". In the meantime, Tom has to be feeling more than a touch insecure considering that Harry's managed to battle back from everything he's done to him and is rather more capable now, despite Azkaban's baleful influence. I can see several of Harry's friends rallying to him as needed and I quite expect Albus is going to have difficulty regaining whatever control he thought he had; that he likely won't be able to nor will Harry want him to just warms my heart. I have to chuckle at Severus Snape's reaction as he finds out that once again a Potter has bested him.
(#) Nakor 2012-04-10 05:41:21 PM
And hope Harry will teach Albus who's the boss ...
(#) stag 2012-04-10 08:29:12 PM
keep up the good work
(#) traviswj 2012-05-15 09:34:01 PM
This story is an excellent one so far, please keep up the exquisite quality of it.
(#) daled73 2012-07-04 07:24:52 PM
Well, we all seem to agree the CHapter was a good one. You indicated an intent to update monthly, and that was 3 1/2 months ago. Hopefully Real Life isn't messing with you again, and we will see the next chapter soon.
(#) clm1275 2012-07-14 05:28:44 PM
Just had to say I am really enjoying this story so far. Haven't been disappointed with a chapter yet. Please keep them coming. From a new fan
(#) Astorath 2012-08-23 12:50:19 PM
may i ask will harry end up with anyone one
(#) GetlostD91 2012-08-29 06:09:43 PM
really good story looking forward to the next chapter