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• I Could Until Again

  (#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-03-20

  Wow. That was so sweet! You're a great poet, and your mom sounds pretty cool.
  So glad that you're posting again!
  OXO

  Author's response

  Thank you very much and yeah, she was pretty cool!
  Sorry that I haven't posted for ages, I just kinda lacked motivation and inspiration. I'll try to have some sort of one-shot up tomorrow night if I can. :)

• I Could Until Again

  (#) shannleighm 2012-03-20

  This is gorgeous and you are so talented! Prayers for your mommy! I'm sure your Nan will love this!

  Author's response

  Thank you very much; I hope she will! :D

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  (#) KelseyChem 2012-03-20

  That was beautiful, I love the optimism and I'm willing to bet that's exactly how your mama would want to be remembered :3

  Author's response

  Thank you very, very much. :)

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  (#) tortillachip 2012-03-20

  This is a beautiful poem! I think it really showed your emotions and it wasn't depressing. I'm glad that you will dwell on all of the positive aspects of your mother's life. And I completely agree that someone would want to be remembered for their good qualities. This is a very emotional poem and it really is truly amazing. I absolutely believe that you should give her your poem. It is honestly marvelous!

  Author's response

  Aw, thank you very, very much! I'm really relieved that you thought that this wasn't depressing; I was really worried that it came across as all mopey and that's the one thing that I didn't want this to be, so it's really nice to know that you don't think it was depressing.I think I will give to my Nan; I hope she likes it!
  
  Thank you soooo much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review! :)

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  (#) Frankies_Hands 2012-03-21

  You're an amazing poet and this really reflected it. I'm so sorry about your loss, your mother seems like a wonderful person! I'm glad I took the time to read it because it was beautiful, full of love and heart. I can tell you allowed your emotions take over. I think you should give it to your Nan, she would love it too.
  Not mopey or depressing at all.

  Author's response

  Thank you very much and yes, she was an extremely wonderful person! I'm really pleased that the love element of this poem came across as that was one thing that I definitely wanted this poem to be full of because love is what I did/do feel for my mother.Thanks for taking the time to review! :)

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  (#) KobraBlaze 2012-03-21

  This is a beautiful poem and I'm sure your nan will love it. It is really well written and well... just some quality writing once again! It is a really nice thing to do. It shows such emotion without being depressing and just shows how strong you are to continue for her. I'm sure your mother would love this and you should definitley give it to your nan! :)

  Author's response

  Thank you very, very much; I sincerely hope that she will like it. I'm really glad that emotion came through in this as I really did try to make it as full of feeling as possible, so it's a relief to hear that you think it shows emotion without being depressing.
  
  Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)

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  (#) Mikeyunicornrawr 2012-03-25

  That was beautiful.
  I just know your mother is proud of you for handling this so well. And you'll be reunited with her some day

  Author's response

  Thank you very much, that really does mean a lot to me. :)

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