Beautiful chapter; it had me gripped and feeling desperate for the characters throughout. It was nice to see how Gerard is coping with having to look after such a troubled younger brother and it really got to me how the only person he really cares about is Mikey and about how he feels he's let him down. The flashback was very well place and used extremely well; it gave a perfect glance into just how horrific Mikey's life was/is and made me all the more sympathetic towards both Way brothers.
Great chapter and I look forward to more! :)
Thank you! Your reviews make me so happy! I'm delighted you like it. I think I have been trouble showing how traumatising Mikey's life is. So I'm glad it came through in this chapter. Gerard is just about coping with it all but will he last?! I don't even know. Thank you very very much for the review. I hope to have one up tonight