“Face it, Way, Fall Out Boy is way better than MCR.” Short PIKEY one-shot. Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
(#) snake56tongue 2012-03-31 09:56:11 PMHa ha, you needn't worry about not being funny, this is hilarious!
I love how Gee was constantly saying how Pete was so arrogant and that.
And then their little fight which made me want to cuddle them both...
And then Gerard was like "gasp They're not together, are they!?"
And then Pete, like the smooth bastard he is, drops that last line.
You, my darling, are a genious :)
Author's responseThank you very much, I'm extremely pleased that you found this funny!
It was definitely a bit of a shock for poor old Gerard finding out about his brother that way. Especially with Pete's last line. Smooth bastard.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D
(#) tortillachip 2012-04-01 08:12:32 AMThis is such a great story!!! It was really funny, especially the end. I love how Pete was so full of himself, yet he still lost the argument. I also liked how Gerard had clues about Pete and Mikey, but probably didn't even notice. Like how Mikey goes to the Fall Out Boy bus before every show and how they get a certain look on their face when someone brings up the other one's name. Pete's statement at the end totally confirmed Gerard's suspicions.
Mikey and Pete are super cute together. Anyway, this was no failure. It was a huge success! It really made me laugh! Great job!!!
Author's responseThank you very much! I was aiming for funny with this, something that I normally suck at, so it's really good to know that you found it to be so. I tried to make it out like Gerard had all the evidence glaring him in the face about Mikey and Pete, but was just in complete denial about the whole thing.
Mikey and Pete are my current OTP, so I definitely agree that they're cute together!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review, I'm glad that it made you laugh! :D