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Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

by ChemicalKilljoy 10 Reviews

"We need your help, Mom. Please help us. We’re not okay." A letter from Gerard and Mikey telling their mother that they're not okay...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters: Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Published: 2012/04/02 - Updated: 2012/04/02 - 1425 words

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  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2012-04-02 12:13:46 PM

    wow, thats really moving! DD: ok i am going to plead shamelessly with you now... brace yourself...

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    WRITE A SEQUEL WITH THE AFTERMATH BECAUSE YOU SHOULD DD: I WOULD SOOOOOOOOOOO READ IT!!

    okay, im done (:

    lina xo

    Author's response

    I physically braced myself when I read that XD And your review just gave me quite a good idea, so fangirl mode ACTIVATE OHMYFRICKENJESUS THANK YOU FOR THIS IDEA!!! I think you'll quite like it, actually....

    Anyhoo (I say that a lot, don't I? God I'm a creep...) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It made me happy! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and you should be receiving cyber cookies any... minute.... now....

    ChemicalKilljoy xo
  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) DangerousAmber 2012-04-02 12:30:50 PM

    Agreed with YouCanRunAwayWithMe^

    It was fantastic and moving :3
    Awesomely awesome writing!

    Xo Danger ♪

    Author's response

    D'aww thanking you! So much! I have overused the exclamation mark! And again! And ag- is slapped

    Anyway, please enlighten me; HOW DO YOU GET THAT MUSIC NOTE THINGIE?! :O

    ChemicalKilljoy xo
  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) MCR_ROCK_RHCP 2012-04-02 02:20:38 PM

    That was just totally amazing!!!!



    Pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pleasepleasepleaseplease with a frankie on top do a sequel!! PLEASE!!

    That story. Just. Djjsgskshsjwbabvsba

    Author's response

    Hah, aww thanks so much! Seriously, thanks for reading and reviewing and I'm really glad you liked it! Since it's the holidays I shall more than likely do a sequel for y'all :)

    ChemicalKilljoy xo
  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) Haze 2012-04-02 03:06:13 PM

    I really like it. I love the approach you took. Even if the prose and concept aren't exactly fresh in spots, I love how it's Gerard and Mikey, together, like a team. I love the letter to their mom format; you've done so much with characterization, especially indirect with their mom. Awesome work. Moving and cinematic.

    - Haze

    Author's response

    I really like it. I love the approach you took. Even if the prose and concept aren't exactly fresh in spots, I love how it's Gerard and Mikey, together, like a team. I love the letter to their mom format; you've done so much with characterization, especially indirect with their mom. Awesome work. Moving and cinematic.

    Thank you very much :) I don't think I've ever written anything particularly moving before, and I'm really glad you liked the format; I didn't know how people would respond to that. Thanks for your review ;)

    ChemicalKilljoy xo

    Hum, I have no idea why your review posted there too...? Ah well :)
  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) LatherTheBlood 2012-04-02 03:47:59 PM

    UHHHHHHHH ITS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LONG! i haven't read it yet... Not being nasty but do i have to? no good. I'm sure it is a wonderful story ChemicalKilljoy but tbh i just actually cant be fucked. I shall read it later, goodbye xo

    LTBxo

    Author's response

    You. Will. Read. It. Or I will sneak to your house, kill the rat and take the raag hostage. Oh, and I'll fly to Edinburger and kill Terrance. Love you.

    ChemKill xo
  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) LatherTheBlood 2012-04-02 03:57:21 PM

    Okay, so i read it whilst watching Mulan, pretty good bro. Do sequal - is that how you spell it? aw well i dont care- now or i shall bring my rat and steal all of your lynx africa. Be scared.

    LTBxo

    Author's response

    opens eyes extremely wide THOU SHALT NOT STEAL MY LYNX AFRICA!! grabs all 500 cans of it and hides them somewhere Anywhore, thanks for reviewing and omnom, not watched Mulan for a while... goes and watches Mulan with my 500 Lynx Africa cans...

    ChemicalKilljoy xo
  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) FabulousRevenge 2012-04-02 05:23:23 PM

    This is incredible. It made me fucking cry that's how moving it was for me. I really can't put into words how much I loved this ABD how well written it was. It made so much sense to me too; almost like some of what I've been wanting to say for ages has finally been written down and actually makes sense.

    ~ Abigail Eve xoxo

    Author's response

    It made you cry? Wow... I've never written anything tear-wrenching before, so I guess it's a start, huh? Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it meant something to you. :)

    ChemicalKilljoy xo
  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) LatherTheBlood 2012-04-03 04:52:01 AM

    How dare you threaten to kill Ratbbz and take Raagbbz, AND HOW FUCKING DARE YOU THREATEN TERRANCE'S LIFE, YOU ARE NEVER GETTING TO MEET HIM AGAIN! bitch.. jokes, love you. LOL jokes im gonna kill you in your sleep bby. LOL jokes, im not gonna do that, Rat is. LOL jokes love you.

    LTBxo

    Author's response

    I can totally see that you love me so much... And I will threaten Raat/Raag/Terrence if you threaten to steal my wonderdrug also known as Lynx Africa...

    ChemicalKilljoy xo
  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) LatherTheBlood 2012-04-03 04:56:22 AM

    Takes Raat/Raag/Terrence into safe haven.

    LTBxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxo

    Author's response

    Sprays self with Lynx Africa NOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOM.

    CK xo
  • Dear Mom, We're Not Okay.

    (#) RockMusic 2012-04-12 04:43:21 AM

    This was so amazing and beautiful and inspiring.
    I finally got myself to stop the tears. It didn't help much that my shuffle played Together Burning Bright. Anyway, it was all so moving together. Almost made me want to confess some stuff to my mom. The whole letter format was genius .

    Author's response

    Haha aw thank you so much. I'm glad it made you feel that way (not in a bad way) and I'm happy you enjoyed it :3

    ChemicalKilljoy xo

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