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It's a Long Way Home

by ChasingPavementsxoxo 2 reviews

Just a song I REALLY WANT FEEDBACK.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Published: 2012-04-05 - Updated: 2012-04-05 - 346 words

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So, just a song I've been writing. It's not totally done, but I cant figure out how to finish it. So I decided I would put it up here, see what ya'll think. Okay. Here goes.
xxIzzy




its a long way home
from where your standin’
take a back road darling
you’ll make it there, someday

and when your all alone
and you lose the feelin
can’t think of what your dreamin
it seems so far away

and you know it must be true
when they’re makin fun of you
how can so many people be wrong?

and if they speak the truth
they say it right in front of you
forget about staying strong


~~~INSERT LYRICS I HAVEN'T WRITTEN YET HERE~~


and I’m sorry
i’m not worth it
don’t beat yourself up over me

and I hate pity
I don’t need prayers
what have they done for me?

and its okay to cry
you don’t have to lie
and immortals always die at the hands of saviors

darlin, i know life’s tough
and you think your not enough
you don’t have to be strong

in my right hand, I hold yours
In my wrong hand, this guitar

all around me
a firey beauty
I’ve burned in a black parade

and its okay to cry
you don’t have to lie
and immortals always die at the hands of saviors
darlin, i know life’s tough
and you think your not enough
you don’t have to be strong

and i wonder
in this life
if anyone cares enough
to see past this
my hard exterior
the facade is cracking

And I know I never cry
and you always see me lie
and how could immortals die?
was there ever a savior?

but theres no looking back
and we can’t know for a fact
trust is never earned, but taken

but its a long way home
from where your standin
take the back road, darlin
we’ll make it there some day

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