Frank stays off school with Mikey.
(#) tortillachip 2012-04-07 05:44:20 PMOh wow! Such a great chapter! I'm practically on the edge of my seat with wonder about what's going to happen next. I didn't really expect for Frank to kiss Mikey, but it was a really nice surprise. I wonder what's going to happen with Frank and Mikey now that Frank kissed him and then ran away. And Frank's attitude in the story isn't the best it could be, but that just makes the story more original. There are not many stories where Frank isn't perfect, so I really like Frank's personality here. It hasn't been done much before. He really is intense like he was described in an earlier chapter. Anyway, I can't wait for Mikey to tell him everything. Well, great job and I really can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's responsewow, thanks for such an awesome review! I kinda hoped people wouldn't see the kiss coming so I'm glad you like the surprise. Frank and Mikey's relationship is definitely going to develop in some way in the future chapters. Frank was supposed to be sort of...imperfect in this story, I wanted him to be a bit of a dick sometimes and really intense. thank you again and an update shouldn't be too far away.
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-04-07 06:46:42 PMOh so exciting!!! I really can't wait for more. I really liked how Frank finally exploded towards the end. You could see him getting more and more frustrated through out the chapter. The kiss has really made things more complex and I want to know if Mikey will tell Frank his secret. Please update soon. So much suspense!!!! :)
Author's responseThank you :) I wanted Frank to become sort of more...unhinged as the chapter went on. More shit is definitely going to go down and an update should be up pretty soon.
- WARNING: I can't write good reviews when I'm freaking out. Great chapter. Well written. Sooo awesome. Yay! This was amazing and biblical and I'm fucked up a little bit. BEWARE: Bitchy selfish bastard comment coming....now! Please please please update soon!
Author's responseThank you, I guess it's a good thing I made you freak out...? Anyway, biblical? Wow, thanks, I'm just glad you like my writing. Already started the next chapter so shouldn't be too long until its up.