Where do Jon and Brendon take her? Lou comes clean to the boys, and gets a surprising reaction from Spencer.
(#) TheBalladOfPhoebe 2012-04-12 11:26:30 AMI just have to say, i reallly love this story! I honestly cant wait for the next update so please please please make it soon! Keep up the fabulous work :)
Author's responseThank you so much! Next update will be in two weeks, unfortunately. But I am currently working on chapter 10, so it will give me more time to finish that and maybe work on some other stuff. Plus, chapter 9 has to be betaed, and I'm currently having some difficultly with my beta. Hopefully, that will be resolved soon. Look out for the 25th of this month though; that'll be when the next chapter should hopefully go up.
(#) shortstacklover 2012-04-16 02:01:26 AMOhk now....
RYAN GET YOUR HANDS OFF HER YOU'RE MINE MINE MINE!!! Awwwwww she no want to talk to her bro?!?! Anyway I think you should chuck in some joncer and Rydon just randomly cause you know I love my gay smut X) AHAHAHAHA also WHY WAS THERE NO MOTHER TRUCKIN FLAPJACKS FOR HER TO EAT ^-^ I'm curious if Jon smells like christmas and ryan smells like vanilla what does spencer smell like?! And lol Ryan's pants X) I want!!! grabby hands MY LIP IS NUMB!! I think Ryan can come bite it now!!! Lol beside the point I was trying to get at.... I LOVE LLAMAS!!! Oooooh look a butterfly!!!! Annnnnyyywaaayyy your mother truckin chapters are so bloody long!!! Omg I'm saying mother truckin in front of everything now MOTHER TRUCKIN FLAPJACKS! Can I has some pwease?!?! Anyway.... SHE FELL OVER ON THE BUS!!! (pointing out the obvious FTW!) haha there you go my baby a very long review full of my lovely randomness
Author's responseDear, dear, dear. I think the medicine the dentist gave you is affecting your brain. Your reviews always make me laugh, especially ones like these! XD
No, Joncer would ruin it cause then Lou can't get with Spencer!
YES!!!!! I was waiting for something else you would slip in there!!!! epic high five And I'm sorry, I'll try and give her some later.
Spencer just smells like... Spencer.
Why the hell are you going on about Ryan's pants?!?! raises eyebrow And the lip biting thing... backs away slowly XD
Sorry, I just hate short chapters. And yes, Captain Obvious, thank you very much. I would have never would have guessed she fell if I hadn't written it.
Hah, cheers mate. I'll be looking forward to ya next one! XD
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-16 08:19:49 PMYAY LOUCER!
How did I miss this? Tsk, tsk, tsk. Serious let down. Here I was... wishing there was an update to read. Second glance shows, it's been here waiting for me to read!
Author's responseYes, Loucer! XD
Yeah, I was waiting for your review! I was getting sad cause I thought you'd forgotten me. :'( But then I came home from school and saw the email and jumped up and down on my bed happily. XD
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-16 08:31:06 PMI'm going to check out the one-shot tonight. I just HAD to read and review this as soon as humanly possible upon learning it was updated!
For some stupid unknown reason the emails don't reach me anymore.
O.o loved the parts where she smells Spencer on the hoodie. I was thinking about it and... all my thoughts were happy thoughts.
Also, when he lets go of her hand and holds her? Extremely touching. Amazingly touching. I could barely handle the cute-ness without freaking out in joy.
Oh, and that ending came way too soon.
I'm currently craving more. :D
Author's responseHah, that's okay. You reviewed, I squealed, you're forgiven. And before I go on I must say... HOLY SHIT YOU LIKE FIGHTSTAR TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously, I love you so fucking much right now! :3 Fightstar is epic. 'Nuff said. XD
Well, it's a pretty logical thing to do. You wear a hoodie that belongs to someone else and sometimes (especially if that person smells nice) you can't help but to smell it. Totally non creepy, okay! XD I'm glad that gave you happy thoughts.
Awww, yes, that part. :) I just had to make that happen; I knew you've been dying for some Loucer action and I know that it's time for Spencer to step up the affection! It came quite naturally, actually.
Haha, more will come next week, I promise! Thanks for your amazing (as always) review!
(#) shortstacklover 2012-04-18 12:19:49 AMSorry had to give another comment to shove something else in X) I was going back to Ryan's pant cause I want him naked. Now. EHEHEHEEHEHE!!!and he is a sexy mother trucker that needs to do sexual things with me!!! X) kidding Megan I'm just trying to freak you out!!! Also like I said joncer and Rydon would just inhance the story because then you'd put in incest!! And everyone likes illegal shizzz!!! It true I love illegal stuffs like underage sex with Ryan Ross!!!! X)
Author's responseYes, well... looks awkward you have fun with your sexual fantasies where you and Ryan... Yeah okay, I'm just gonna stop right there. XD
NO FUCKING WAY is there gonna be incest in my story. If you incest, go write your own incestuous story.
And again with Ryan Ross and your sexual fantasies. Shakes head and rolls eyes exasperatedly Really, Sarah, I know you're my friend but please! Control yourself, woman! XD There are some things that I'd rather not know about you... ; )
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-20 04:07:55 AMRandom non-related story review (my apologies) but because you are amazing and happen to like Fightstar... I was wondering, do you like Icon For Hire?
Unrelated bands but both great.
Oh, and you make me feel extremely old.
Author's responseThat's okay.
I've never heard of them actually! (I had to go and look them up! XD) but from what little I heard... They don't sound too bad. I'd definitely be going and giving them another listen in the future. You've piqued my interest.
Aww, really? How old are you, then, if you don't mind me asking?
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-21 12:54:55 AMI haven't met too many people who have actually heard of them, unfortunately.
My favorite songs are Theatre and Iodine. They are great, you should definitely listen again. My former boss actually listened to them lol and at night when we were closing he made me listen and I instantly fell in love so I made him burn me a CD with their music.
Really, really. I'm twenty. I don't really mind. I mean, at least I'm still relatively young. (Not on this site though.) I can only think of two writers on this site who are my age or older than me.
Author's responseWell, actually, I'm planning to download their album. :D They remind me a lot of Paramore.
Hah, that's not old. You could be like, 50 or something; now THATS old! XD And the underage thing? Shhhh holds finger to lips I won't tell if you do! XD Hahaha. I started reading a Frerard where Frank was 17 and Gerard was 47, if it makes you feel any better.
- Omg I just read all of the chapters for the first time and I love it I don't realy like the band that much but I do like some of there songs and the story's line is great
Author's responseI'm glad you like it, thank you! I was surprised when I posted this to find out that a lot of people were enjoying it; and the fact that you like it and you're not even really a fan of Panic! is a good thing; it shows that you don't have to be a fan of something to like it. Thank you.