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If I Pretend

Demyx tries to cheer Axel up. Implied slash.

Category: Kingdom Hearts - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: Axel, Demyx - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/07/02 - Updated: 2006/07/02 - 655 words - Complete

Reviews

• If I Pretend

  (#) Riokshte 2006-07-03 05:23:36 PM

  cries beautiful..
  but
  everything was great... until i reached the end of the story.. but i guess thats how it is with all good stories: you dont want them to end. The only thing i see is that this peice was painfully to short. perhaps it is what you desired, but that was some great writing. Wish you'd flex it more by adding more parts to the story. :3 i was soo into it, and then it just stopped. ;_;

• If I Pretend

  (#) FangedWriter 2006-07-23 05:04:59 PM

  I liked this story. It showed both the fragile side of both Axel and Demyx. I wished it could have been longer though, because I was really into it.

• If I Pretend

  (#) deepdiveriku 2006-07-26 09:29:47 PM

  Very, very cute and sad. You should definitely add on to it and make a sequel.

• If I Pretend

  (#) Axel-Ingleson 2008-07-22 05:35:58 AM

  That was an incredibly good story. I hope you'll write more.
  
  I was going to give you a positive rating but the site wouldn't let me.

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