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Your Fireflies

by CosmicZombie 4 Reviews

I watch your fireflies dance...

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/13 - Updated: 2012/04/13 - 360 words


  • Your Fireflies

    (#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-13 02:22:26 PM

    This is absolutely stunning. It has an almost lyrical feel to it and it had me enchanted throughout. I love the whole concept and the constant use of metaphors that give this a dream-like quality.

    My favorite line is;
    "Of dusty-bottled memories."

    Absolute genius! :D

    Author's response

    Aww, thank you! :'D I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, and thanks for taking the time to leave such a lovely review again!
  • Your Fireflies

    (#) TheBrightestStar 2012-04-22 09:15:14 AM

    That's absolutely beautiful. I've read some of your other works on here, you're a really talented author. Your style is just so gorgeous and moving. Very nice :)

    Author's response

    Thank you so much :'D That really means a lot. Thanks for taking the time to review :)
  • Your Fireflies

    (#) AdnarimSmada 2012-05-25 11:47:12 AM

    Ah, the mood and atmosphere is so mellow and relaxing but the meaning is so deep. It's an absolutely stunning contradiction, this poem here. The loss of the innocent years is never a light subject for anyone alas.

    -Adnarim Smada
  • Your Fireflies

    (#) Savagella666 2012-10-04 09:00:52 AM

    I love this poem. It was so beautiful!
    You're amazing cosmiczombie!:D

    Author's response

    Thank you! :'D

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