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Take My Fucking Hand
(#) EilzC98 2012-04-13 05:10:56 PM
umm... wow. that was surprising! i honestly dont know what to say! Its weird cause i know you in real life and cause you've writen this its strange for me. and offering ice cream was just wrong.Author's response
Yeah, it was kinda awkward to know that you were going to read it... But hey, as long as you don't tell anyone from school, or anyone we know! -
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(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-04-13 09:40:25 PM
The first time I ever wrote a sex scene (I was 13 too...), my best friend texted me his favorite parts...
Anyway, while it matches the rest of your writing style, it's not particularly detailed. Eh... But I have strange standards (that I never seem to meet myself...), but I think it was a good first try. I think that until you can imagine what's going down in your mind just look at the shit everyone else writes and put a little spin on it and use your own words.
I have the strangest urge to write smut now... Hey, you said you liked my story is an Authors response... WHICH ONE?!? I have like three on Ficwad that I'm currently working on...
Anywho. Smu is almost always awkward. Personally, if I'm not in he mood for it or I'm not inspired I FUCKING HATE WRITING IT. It's the only reason I don't write smut stories... Meh. Good job. I'm not even sure what I'm talking about any more...Author's response
Thanks for the advice :) I actually read a lot if smuts but I just felt kinda awkward writing it.
I like your story Fuck the title XD -
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(#) SimplexMinded 2012-06-18 05:09:04 PM
BAD? That was awesome!!!!!Author's response
thankies uoo :3