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"I sure as hell don’t want to survive; I just want to feel alive." Feedback greatly appreciated. :)
(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-21 06:18:07 AMThis is beautiful :)
I love how it basically captures the feelings of most teenage 'outcasts' these days, how the 'popular' kids shun them, and how they think that if they died no body would care.
I feel this way sometimes, how I should just end it so that I could see how everyone would react, and I'm always curious to what people would say if I was gone. You have captured it perfectly :D
But I also like how the person never actually died, how they missed their chance.
Well done :D
Author's responseThank you. :)
I'm extremely pleased that you think I captured it alright. I just wrote how I felt at the time, based on earlier that day when I was late getting picked up from school and it was raining, just like in the poem.
Please, don't ever let those feelings win. I know how hard it can be, trust me, but please don't. I'd miss you way too much!
Thank you very much. :D