"He just… stopped." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-17 03:32:23 PMEvery time you post on here, I drop what I'm doing and rush to the internet to be amazed and awed by your latest updates. And damn, did this amaze. Gerard was (as per usual in these types of stories) being way to overprotective of Mikey. Pete was coming on much too strong, but that's a wonderful part of his character. I burst out laughing when he started interjecting with the custard. Poor Mikey though! I know what it's like to be self esteem-less and so sick that you're seeing Pete Wentz in your bed, but a dad that hates you? I just want to hug that boy till he explodes in a rain of guts and eyeliner. Great update and I can't wait for more!!
Author's responseThank you very, very much!
Gerard as definitely being a little too protective of Mikey, even if Pete was coming on much too strong. I'm glad you think that it's a good part of Pete's character, I was kinda worried that it didn't work.
Yep; poor Mikey. He's got a lot of bad shit going on, the self-esteem issues and his dad being but two. I wanna hug him too!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-04-18 10:18:20 AMso I almost agree with Gerard in this especially after all they've been through.
I love how you give us little snippets of the past without rushing into anything too quickly it really gives time for the characters to build and for us to wonder
I also meant to say on the last review when it was Pete's POV that I loved how you used short sentences it gave the effect of Pete being a little hyper off of the sweets and coffee and it let us see how he thinks clearly
I can't wait for more you have such a way with words and you always leave me wanting to know exactly what's going to happen next so update soon?
Awesome chapter! xD
Author's responseI'm glad you kinda agree with Gerard, I wanted to make him a reasonable sort of guy in this, if a little overprotective.
I'm trying to add little bits of back-story as it goes on, so it's nice to know that you're liking that.
The short sentence thing of last chapter wasn't intentional, but now that you mention it I see what you mean. I'm definitely gonna try to do that for future Pete chapters; thanks for pointing it out!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review! :D