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Lightning (Watch Them Crash Like Thunder)

"Individuality is not a sin." Lyrics. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/18 - Updated: 2012/04/18 - 175 words - Complete

Reviews

• Lightning (Watch Them Crash Like Thunder)

  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-18 12:34:15 PM

  I have goosebumps! This was AMAZING :D It really struck a chord with me, and as always, was brilliantly written. I'd pick the whole poem as my favourite line, but I have to go out and I'm late, so I'll just settle for this one; You are you, so scream and shout and fucking yell.
  
  I wanna write that all over my schoolbooks with my MCR lyrics! xD
  
  Thanks for this, it's amazing.
  
  CosmicZombie xo

  Author's response

  Aw, thank you very much!
  I'm really pleased that you think this was alright!
  
  Thank you so, so much for taking the time to leave such a nice review; you've made my day! :D

• Lightning (Watch Them Crash Like Thunder)

  (#) aweirdtree 2012-04-20 02:45:33 PM

  i liked it! a lot (: thank you. it was really beautifully written and i just read it all through and enjoyed every bit. it was so... so... dammit. just wonderful; i'm sorry i can't find that coherent things to say about it since i'm so tired, but just know that i loved it and am gonna add it to my favourites (: you're a really good writer; just keep going, please :3

  Author's response

  Thanks! I'm very glad that you liked it. It's very nice of you to say that you think I'm a good writer; it's made my day!
  Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :D

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